
Welcome to the first official day of summer, and this week’s edition of Tuesday tales. Our word prompt today is RAKE. I’m continuing with Trouble with Eden, my contemporary romance.

Jackson raked his fingers through his hair, uncomfortable with the direction of the conversation, but determined to be heard. “Like you, whatever Dwayne was thinking when he drafted his will is a mystery, but rest assured, it’s not my intention to take anything away from Eden.” He preferred using that name for her. “In fact, I’d like to make things easier for her. You say she belongs here, and yet I feel a sense of belonging as well. Call it an instinctive recognition of home. Like a salmon swimming upstream to spawn.” Or an elephant finding his way to the graveyard when it was time to die. He shivered.
“When I got word of the bequest, I knew in my gut it was where I was meant to be.” He paused and cleared his throat. Time to lay it all out there and see what Eden’s friend really thought of his chances. “Don’t you think Eden and I can coexist here? Share the business like she and Dwayne did? Share this house, too? It’s certainly big enough. We’re both alone, or so I’ve been led to believe. Neither of us has any other family. I could move into the apartment. Don’t you think we can make all this work? I’ve washed my hands of Toronto and all the sad memories there.”
“So, you are planning to stay here.” She cocked her head. “I suspected as much when you asked to have your med file updated. I used the business address instead of this one, but if it all works out, that’s an easy fix.” She drank from her cup once more and broke off a piece of the pastry. “You’re right about this being a big house. Dwayne’s grandparents built it just after the war. They had four kids. Sadly, Dwayne’s father was the only one to have children, and it looks like you’re the last of that line.” She buttered the scone, added a dollop of jam, and popped it into her mouth. She swallowed. “Try the scones. Betty is the best cook in the area. I don’t know about the apartment though—you must go down five steps to get to it, something that won’t be easy with a wheelchair, but Betty might not want to give up her new home. She and Eden came to an arrangement that gives her the apartment as part of her salary.”
That’s it. Stay safe and don’t forget to check out the other Tuesday Tales
Love the gentle way each of the main characters tries to adjust to the new circumstances, learning to fit in with their new reality, despite all the obstacles. As they go about that, each still has the other in mind, as that person’s “rightness” with the situation so greatly affects their own. Great job!
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Thanks, Flossie
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Great work. I especially like the last part with the scone- lots of great body action mixed in with the words. A real pleasure to read. Jillian
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I try to show and not tell, but I know I tell a lot. That’s just the way I write. LOL
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Story TELLING is in the definition. I like telling!! 🙂
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Bless you!
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What a great scene in a story that I am loving immensely. Great job! Great, creative way to use ‘rake’ too.
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I love his boldness. I’m curious how Eden will react to it. Great job!
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