Tuesday Tales: From the Word MOUSE

Welcome to this week’s Tuesday Tales, and A Case of Mistaken Identity, my NaNoWriMo novel this year. I’m pleased to say the story is going very well, and I’m more than two-thirds through. A story moves quickly when it’s written this way and doesn’t leave a lot of room for explanation. I hope you don’t have too much trouble following the disjointed scenes. Our word prompt this week is MOUSE.

Opening my Search program, I typed in Asleep with the Empress, the name Al had given his dive company. It came up right away. The site was well done, easy to navigate, and provided all the information a diver would need, from the size of the boat, the air mix in the tanks, to the qualifications needed to dive. I used the mouse to highlight Al’s name to learn a little more about the museum curator-dive boat company owner. As an investigator, I was used to researching both the people and every aspect of a case, but there was something that didn’t feel right about checking out the guy taking me to dinner. Still, I didn’t let it stop me.

Alphonse Binette was forty-three years old, which made him eight years older than me. He was ex-military, a former US Navy Seal, who’d retired ten years ago and had started the business. His diving qualifications were listed as well as the honors he’d received serving in the US Navy. There wasn’t anything unusual about that. Lots of Canadians had opted to join the US military during WWII, the Korean War, and the Vietnam War, and again right after 9 11. Had he lost someone significant that day? Twenty-four Canadians had died in the terrorist attack, including the grandson of a woman from our church who’d been at the World Trade Center for a business meeting. His wife had been pregnant at the time. My parents had taken me to the funeral, both of them afraid that the attack had been a prelude to war. They hadn’t been wrong.

Feeling too much like a voyeur, I changed my search to information concerning the boathouse fires he’d mentioned. As a detective, I was constantly looking for holes in a story. It wasn’t that I assumed everyone was lying, but two years of doing this job had taught me that a good many people did. Everyone had skeletons in the closets and secrets. It occurred to me that if I had taken the imposter out on my boat, and she’d somehow ended up in the water, I wouldn’t want to take a chance on anyone finding anything that could incriminate me.

Arson would get rid of the evidence quickly, and if other boats got damaged in the process, well, that would convolute matters and cover up the crime even more quickly. There wasn’t much information there, but I did see the line requesting anyone with information to contact Charles Lavoie. It seemed my inspector had his hands full.

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Published by Susanne Matthews

Hi! I live in Eastern Ontario. I'm married with three adult children and five wonderful grandchildren. I prefer warm weather, and sunshine but winter gives me time to write. If I’m listening to music, it will be something from the 1960s or 1970s. I enjoy action movies, romantic comedies, but I draw the line at slasher flicks and horror. I love science fiction and fantasy as well. I love to read; I immerse myself in the text and, as my husband says, the house could fall down around me, and I’d never notice. My preferences are as varied as there are genres, but nothing really beats a good romance, especially one that is filled with suspense. I love historical romance too, and have read quite a few of those. If I’m watching television, you can count on it being a suspense — I’m not a fan of reality TV, sit-coms, or game shows. Writing gives me the most pleasure. I love creating characters that become real and undergo all kinds of adventures. It never ceases to amaze me how each character can take on its own unique personality; sometimes, they grow very different from the way I pictured them! Inspiration comes from all around me; imagination has no bounds. If I can think it, imagine it, I can write it!

16 thoughts on “Tuesday Tales: From the Word MOUSE

  1. We both used the computer mouse as opposed to the mouse that makes people say, “eek” LOL!

    I am intrigued by her search about Al. Seems there may be some interesting things ahead! And I love his name. Does it have any significance to you? Or do you just like the name Alphonse? I do! Jillian

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  2. Good use of the word prompt. Intriguing story. I’m wondering what crime had perhaps been covered up and would she be able to unravel the mystery. Looking forward to more. Great job!

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  3. Your productivity is amazing! Congratulations on doing such a fine job with NaNo. I enjoyed the part where she felt a qualm at investigating him but didn’t let that stop her– good girl! This looks to be an engrossing story. Is your Stones book out yet?

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